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what you missed out on!

Author: secret kisses
ASL Info:    22/f/uk
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i was bullied at school for being, short, flat chested and big now its all changed, i just love to see the boys faces when they see what they missed out on, but remember kids, it comes from within too.

what you missed out on!

i remember a time when you called me fat,
those words hurt, but the meaning lacked,
a turned a corner in my new life,
now i am fit like j.lo and my energy hyped.

there once was a time when you call me fried eggs,
because i was flat, and hadnt grown breasts,
now you gawp, and cant belive what you see,
and yes its all me all 32DD,

ive changed for the better,
im hard driven im not a quiter,
its because of you that im driven,
at school the chance was never given,

so i thank you for hating me,
its just a shame that you couldnt meet the inner me,
cos in the inside im even better,
i see the beeds cumin your even sweatier,

bet your sorry you missed out,
watch your lip go as i pout,
i hear you same dame, as i wiggle,
its worth it if you miss me just a little.

Submitted on 2006-03-30 14:04:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Thats dope yo! I am really feeling that piece. I feel ya all that way! I use to be like that too........kinda. People use to try to bully me all the time and make fun of me. Guys and girls. I got those same girls liking me now. And those same guys trying to be cool with me. So in my conclusion people are full of [censored]
| Posted on 2006-03-31 00:00:00 | by L.i. | [ Reply to This ]

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