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    dots Submission Name: Princess Taliadots
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    Author: deathbelow
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 34/43/17
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 744
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       Hahah Im bored and messing around about my friend...


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    dotsPrincess Taliadots
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    It will be ok
    When he fucks you up the ass like he did yesterday
    I know Ill hear you scream in pain
    Your ass will never be the same
    But still you like it and take it more
    Its ok you know your a whore
    But Ill be your friend
    To the very end
    And Ill buy you a little pillow for your ass
    And hope this pain will pass
    When your ass bleeds
    Ill be here for all your needs
    So Ill be your friend
    To the very end..
    Even when you get fucked up the ass
    Your friend Ill be the best!





    Submitted on 2006-03-30 14:08:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lol lol, wow ahem ermmm....
    actually i liked this piece hahaha
    god bless
    good expression haha
    god bless
    nadine
    ohhh, have you showed her this piece ? hehe
    | Posted on 2006-03-30 00:00:00 | by lostspirit | [ Reply to This ]


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