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    Author: Avril54
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    Hello everyone, me and my sister Skye/Jeniffer have a dream dictionary we would like to use to interpret your dreams! Just post your dreams here (or you can private message them to us)
    and we'll send you back a PM with the info!
    You'd be surprised at what they mean.....


    Not that it means anything.....




    Submitted on 2006-03-30 18:09:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey Avril

    I always have this recurring dream that I am back in High School except I am the age I am now 38 and I am finding it hard to Graduate
    Sometimes I find that it is elemantary school I have to graduate from as well but Im still 38 the age I am now
    A lot of my dreams have to do with water as well
    With water or rain or the ocean being the center image of the dream

    Let me know what it says
    You take care of yourself
    It was GREAT hearing from you
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok one time i had a dream were i was dead and was wereing this bracelet but once the braclet got wet in the rain i was alive again and i was in my elemetary school

    also my furthest back that i can remeber a clown was puting me in many many sacks one into another kinda weird sence im not afriad of clowns

    Well have fun with these tell me what they mean
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by Draycon | [ Reply to This ]
      i once had a dream that the guy i fell in love with fell into a coma and i freaked out.
    i cried and cared more than anyone.
    my friends were sad because i was constantly sad and his girlfriend (which he loved) was also sad and upset but not as much as me.
    help me out here?
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      Okay, in my dream, I'm running from this guy and I'm running in a cemetary. He has a knife in his hands and I just know he's going to kill me. That's when I trip over a gravestone. And surprise, surprise, the gravestone belongs to me. My name is on it in big bold letters. As I realize this, I look up and the man has gotten really close and he's smiling at me, so I get up and start to run but it's like I'm going in slow motion. Finally he catches up to me and digs his nails into my back, so I turn around to face him, only it's not him. It's my sister and she has blood all over her and she is also smiling at me. That's when I start to look down at my hands and notice that I'm holding the knife.

    If you could interpret this for me, I would be very grateful.

    ~Piper
    | Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]
      Well-
    I had a really eerily scary one a while ago-

    I have a little brother 10 years younger than me. he and i are very close. I had a dream that my sisters, he and i were sitting on a land bridge with a huge gully under us. the landscape was pure rust, tan, brown and greyish shades. it was really hot but i saw that more than felt it. i was scolding my sisters for fighting when all of a sudden, i look over and my brother is at the edge of the bridge and just dropps over the edge. no screams, no warning or struggle, he just dropps. i woke up totally feaked out and actucally had to go make sure he was ok in his own bed. It was terrifying and weird.

    is this just a classic- "i'm scared of losing him" dream or somthing more devious?

    Cool post by the way! Dreams are awesome
    SASHA LYNN
    | Posted on 2006-03-31 00:00:00 | by Sasha Lynn | [ Reply to This ]
      I dreamed that someone cut all of my hair off in my sleep. I never saw the guy's face, but it was really weird. Dreams in which I'm asleep at all are just too weird for me. You should have a field day with that one, Amy
    | Posted on 2006-03-31 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      I dreamed I had cancer. And Died ..... the end .... seriously that's all i dreamed. And i never wrote about this dream because it hit too close to who i am. Because my friends were there for me 24/7 but my family couldn't care less. you know what that means. My friends are more important to me than my family.
    | Posted on 2006-03-30 00:00:00 | by GOGO1877 | [ Reply to This ]
      ok, I dreamed that I had joined a poetry site, where you could post stuff.

    I posted a lot of poems, and got a lot of nice comments, and gave a lot of comments too, and spent hours every day making some great new friends.

    Then one day I'm doing some comments and there's this post asking for dreams, so I start typing "ok, I dreamed that I had joined a poetry site, where you could post stuff.

    I posted a lot of poems, and got a lot of nice comments, and gave a lot of comments too, and spent hours every day making some great new friends.

    Then one day I'm doing some comments and there's this post asking for dreams, so I start typing "ok, I dreamed that I had joined a poetry site, where you could post stuff.

    I posted a lot of poems, and got a lot of nice comments, and gave a lot of comments too, and spent hours every day making some great new friends.

    Then one day I'm doing some comments and there's this post asking for dreams, so I start typing "ok, I dreamed that I had joined a poetry site, where you could post stuff.

    I posted a lot of poems, and got a lot of nice comments, and gave a lot of comments too, and spent hours every day making some great new friends.

    Then one day I'm doing some comments and there's this post asking for dreams, so I start typing "ok, I dreamed that I had joined a poetry site, where you could post stuff.

    I posted a lot of poems, and got a lot of nice comments, and gave a lot of comments too, and spent hours every day making some great new friends.

    Then one day I'm doing some comments and there's this post asking for dreams, so I start typing "
    | Posted on 2006-03-30 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Fudge! Are you talking about dreams like when you are asleep at night? Cuz I rarely ever have those.
    But as luck would have it, I just had one last night and here it is for y'all to analyze...hee-hee!


    I was in the forest near where I grew up in the Sierra Nevada mountains. Just wandering around I thought, but apparently I was doing something wrond, cuz two sheriff deputies drove up and arrested me.

    The next thing I know, we are in a small town called Chilcoot, CA, and I am handcuffed in the back of a truck. One of the deputies says, "Dave, I am gonna uncuff you and want you to take this radar gun and monitor the traffic for us while we get a frostie." Yeah, we were in the parking lot of the frostie there in Chilcoot. So of course I agree, but step across the street to the local grocery store and decide to monitor traffic from behing the window of the store. As I walk in, there is a woman that I know from Sacto who just so happens to be the clerk. I've known her for years and she is about my age, blond with big boobs, and we are pretty much identical as far as personalities go...ya know? She looks at me, walks over, gives me a short kiss on the lips and says, "Thank you."

    So I thought that was quite odd and wanted to jump her bones and take her right then and there, but the cops wanted me to monitor traffic for them.

    So I did and caught a lot of people going over the posted speed limit and was yelling at the cops about it. They didnt seem to care, but did tell me that I had to flip a switch on the radar gun that sent out a light to inform the drivers they were being "radared"...otherwise it would be against the law for them to stop them because of some left wing liberal bullsh*t law, ya know?

    So I flip the switch and the next car that comes along happens to be a sheriff car from a different county...and he is going 72 miles an hour and the posted speed limit is 45.

    I told the cops that were eating ice cream this and they said..."

    And then I woke up.


    Could you please explain that too me? If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to contact me.
    Have a good night.
    | Posted on 2006-03-30 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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