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    dots Submission Name: Older is not betterdots

    Author: Lukas
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 12/27/8
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsOlder is not betterdots

    Sister Sister cant you see
    that this man is to old for thee
    He might be nice and smart
    but he only likes girls body parts
    I am trying to warn you for your own good
    this Older man is a Hood
    He should keep his dick to himself
    If no i'll take a ax and leave blood on his shelf

    Submitted on 2006-03-30 18:11:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      When I read this I was mad. First of all you are being too overprotective. Stop it. Its not like I even see you know who and its not like he will ever do anything. I appreciate your concern and still I wish you would not worry. To Andrea's comments, I am quite aware of Alonzo's feelings but like I said I wish he wouldn't worry. I am fine. Trust me. I think you were a little too blunt and that the dagger which you used to illustrate your point was a bit too pointy. POINT TAKEN. Yet I will not stop talking to you know who because well he inspires me and is a role model. Thanks for the poem. It does make a point but for now I will just say that nothing has happened so I will not stop it. Thanks. Love you.
    | Posted on 2006-04-09 00:00:00 | by Katrinagolden | [ Reply to This ]
      oh my god alonzo,

    i never knew you could be so blunt even in your own subtlety. No offense sis, but this piece made me laugh. I never knew lonzo was like this or that he could be so straightfoward with his feelings toward another person. I hope that this piece doesnt cause a contraversy between you guys and I hope that ana is aware of lonzo's feelings.

    | Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by ladydeathstrike | [ Reply to This ]

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