I really liked the feel of this one & it was a bit melancholy but romantically. I loved, "Tears
the shore line;" that just brought a vision to my mind of searching and waiting though the waves are crashig upon the shore touching it all along.
This was very nice! I think this was incredibly beautiful and I agree with vintage, the last stanza makes the poem what it is. I love poems that incorporate nature into them. And when I think about the sun and the moon playing, I think of an eclipse, how the two cross paths... Sounds kind of like love, doesn't it? This was a great poem, and definitely a favorite. ...bb...