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    dots Submission Name: I see myself.dots
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    Author: Tenirsk
    ASL Info:    16/F/N/A
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 4/17/29
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Serious
    Total Views: 196
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    Bytes: 988



    Description:
       A result of my low confidence and dwellings on my inner and outer 'beauty.'


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    dotsI see myself.dots
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    There's a woman peering at me; peering outside at the woman peering at myself. In the mirror I see myself peering at the woman. But, she doesn't see inside herself. She doesn't see myself, I don't see the beauty in the woman I'm peering at inside myself; no there is no beauty. Peering from the inside, with so much beauty, looking at the woman peering on the inside with no beauty. The woman on the outside wants the woman on the inside, myself I can't have, for I have no beauty and I can't be what the woman sees on the inside for even the inside sees the true woman on the outside as part of herself on the inside. Myself in the mirror I see, though The woman peering from the inside, is the same woman peering from the outside, yet she can't see herself as anything other than myself. She wishes I was other than myself, both inside and out. But, beauty on the inside is not beauty on the outside, myself I see, but herself I do not wish for.




    Submitted on 2006-03-31 15:23:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This write is very deep
    This write draws me back to my youth when I used to look into a mirror and ask who are you and what do you want
    You captured that sentiment perfectly
    This is an excellent write
    God Bless
    Ron

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