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    dots Submission Name: To the founder of my dead bodydots
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    Author: Darcey D
    ASL Info:    17/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 50/78/42
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
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       hmmm to all those who make fun of others an think your cool shit because of it. here you are


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    dotsTo the founder of my dead bodydots
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    Hello
    This is to the founder of my dead body
    5 seconds ago I was murdered. Dont mind the blood on the floor or the screams for help that you heard. I know this must be bad for you and for that I must apologize, but on that note I must apologize again for all the bad deads I've done in my poor excuse of a life. To all those Ive made fun and hurt because of it I humbly apologize. To all those please forgive me for I have paid for my sins with my life. Surely this does not surpise you now? To know that I died on the end of a bad joke. Have a wonderfull life for my has just ended and made your day a better one.




    Submitted on 2006-03-31 19:28:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was really good. It totally made me laugh. I don't know if I was supposed to, but I just laughed. Good job. It was very unique. I have never heard anything like this before.

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    | Posted on 2006-04-08 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
      This is good irony… people tend to make excuses even for dying but I don't think that anyone should apologize for dying or for being afraid to die. It is our nature to be afraid of dying especially when someone tries to kill us.
    We should be responsible for our actions— we shouldn’t apologize for the bad deeds.

    Keep your head up when you face society… we live in a cruel world…
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by Sad Lion | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the form of this, but I'm confused. Wouldn't the person who found the dead body see the person who killed you if it was 5 seconds ago? To me this isn't serious, is it?
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by Finnigan | [ Reply to This ]


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