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    dots Submission Name: Veildots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsVeildots
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    Even naked you seem clothed in something
    I wish I could lift the veil with which you cover yourself
    and finally see you.




    Submitted on 2004-01-21 14:34:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the way this thought was presented, the idea of someone yet again erecting an emotional shelter around them that is hard to get past.
    | Posted on 2004-06-30 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and neat! Amazing how much you manage to convey in simple words and a short verse. Good stuff!
    | Posted on 2004-01-21 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      you truly are an impressive poet, another masterpiece
    | Posted on 2004-01-21 00:00:00 | by love gone wrong | [ Reply to This ]
      Yet again, you've done it. Short, clean, perfect. I am in awe. You have one powerful gift, girl. Don't let people nag you into longer poems. You're so good at the short ones. <><
    | Posted on 2004-01-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      Perfect, simply perfect
    | Posted on 2004-01-21 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]


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