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    dots Submission Name: Complexdots
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    Author: obscureskies
    ASL Info:    19/F/Fredericton NB
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 11/17/15
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotsComplexdots
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    maybe this is me
    swept up entangled in
    frivolous inconsequentialities
    like a rodent that knows not
    of the complexities
    of the complex beyond its complex

    maybe this isnít me
    perhaps itís some
    green-eyed impostor
    seeing clarity amidst
    the obscure skies
    the obscurity that is so simply
    Complex.




    Submitted on 2006-04-01 00:45:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this, though I am not sure why. As Cordell said, it was short and to the point, but it was also complex, excuse my play on your title. :D I liked the original format and the context. Good job.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      Cute nice way of changing it at the end! Maybe its the world did ya think about that? ;) Nice write short & to the point keep it up peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]


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