Description: i think i'm starting to understand....
A Snowflake's Perspective -------------------------------------------
hearts are timely drunkened
with the finely aged fruit
from the tree of perspective
mirrors sometimes shatter
from the contrast of cold truth
in a warm souls reflection
...in the calm of the eye
in the center of a storm
we are screaming-truthful-lies
lost in blizzards self-assured...
eyes are blind of meaning
the darkest shade of light is black
painted with compromised tone
look beyond your grieving
look for answers, but still look back
for no angel falls alone
...hidden in the headlights glare
are countless snowflake reflections
it will seem like fog until you stare
to cut vision from perception...
Not exactly what I was expecting when I seen it in the 'love' category, but this really works. I have read your work before, and should have known this wouldn't be the typical mushy XOXOXO type of love poem. Your way of writing "outside the box" absolutely fantastic. The words all twirled together and made my head spin through your fragmented thoughts.
well, what can I say..I am adding this to my favorites...your relentless push to the end and the sense of swirling logic, as snowflakes, small and tiny and polished but huge blankets of them fallling obscuring the way...this spoke to me of an awakeneng that distances, and for that the windshield is apt.
Submission Name: A Snowflake's Perspective
