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    dots Submission Name: acid(disses sinceer05)dots
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    Author: PROlifik
    ASL Info:    23/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 23/28/21
    Words: 553
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 896
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3036



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       SINceer05 wont stop....haha battle keeps going


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    dotsacid(disses sinceer05)dots
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    you want it one more time i can give you one more line
    because in all honesty i've yet to out grow my shine
    the blueprint of your raps seems like you own my mind
    cause im the dopest you can find-old school a throwback in time
    so just remember you cant take all thats mine i still gotta book full of rhymes
    you stayed up all night thinking of something to say-you got nothing to say still fronting to this day
    "yo i got you on my last one"please man be serious,yo sinceer are you really bein serious?
    i dont think its a mystery people got it on there favorites list.. man you history another check on the list to me
    they cant resist me,we all saw you try to diss me,man if i left now the whole game would miss me
    we all refuse to believe ya last diss just like every other typical past miss
    im just giving you a reality check ima let you cash this,look at my last hit im dope-"you can smell it when the plastic rips"
    your gonna need way more than a number 2 to pass this,we all agree you need some prac-tice
    man i shouldnt even keep going but i just keep showing the crown i keep owning
    so sinceer...just bein real- for you im gonna keep this one short
    cuz you would be hurtin if i ran you ona full court so for now i'll just leave ya career on life support
    cuz with out me face it what would you have???defionatly no fame to grab
    you got your whole game crossed dressed in drag you fag +another level+ was the best you had
    so dont be mad just be glad i was the topic of the best lyrics you ever had
    in every sentance i continue to beat you senseless,your defenseless and you got the never to call me your apprentice??
    so just get it together and freal sin always remember your NEVER gonna be on my level and thats forever
    street light entertainment false accusations untill my arrainment this is my defense my last statment
    before i put ya ass under the pavement your just jealous since my name hit,no longer number one wit ya lame shit
    shouldnt have gave you gold on +ill street+ shoulda gave you piss i put ya name on peoples favorite list
    so dont just bring some rap none of that dumb crap im layin a hundred flat i just want my numbers back
    i've been dissin you for a minute dont call it a comeback-your pain?just might want some herb to numb that
    man you know im worth paper you faker- who you got to thank for making you major you hater ?now we ALL hate ya
    so now and then i'll deliever a hexed rhyme to protect mine at who evers next in line im like a vet with rhymes
    so theres no question if i'll survive to witness your dimise till theres no way to revive your lives
    theres no way they will find you alive
    its OVER man this is the FINAL post the final roast you got nothing left to boast even with the finest shit you wrote
    you wouldnt stay afloat not even gain a vote




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    ||| Comments |||
      Yo, this [censored] is hot, the flow is hot, I enjoyed the punchlines, PORlifik you hot as [censored] .I agree that last line ring bells! I have to read more of ya'll battles. keep it up! .

    Singlerose:)
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by SingleRose | [ Reply to This ]
      hey bubz, your battling justs get better and better, to tell u da truth i didnt think there would be a comeback after sins last one , but hey u did and its gonna have to go up another level to get back at u,
    keep em cummin
    im luvin it
    kyrenia
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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