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    dots Submission Name: A World of Pure Imaginationdots
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    Author: Cullen32
    Elite Ratio:    1.72 - 3/8/7
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I was thinking we lose our imaganation when we get older. I wrote this at school in T.A.G. class. Sorry it's double spaced that's how the Ctrl+Space came out. :)


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    dotsA World of Pure Imaginationdots
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    A world of pure imagination

    We find our selves stuck in it.



    Never wanting to leave,

    Never to go.



    As we grow the magic slowly slips away from our grasp.

    Until we grow old it is a treasure we may not keep.

    The gift of one’s youth goes without warning.



    The worst part is if it is not used,

    It will lock it self tight in out mind.



    When we eventually want it,

    Escape it will,

    And float away.




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