Description: ooooooook..*big sigh* yea i kno it needs a LOT of work..i just wrote it today and Im kind of stuck on how to improve it..I think it needs maybe another stanza..and maybe the repitition is too much? I dont know someone help! lol
Muse -------------------------------------------
oh mighty Lord of Heaven and earth
You rule my life and write my song
eternal love
light divine
muse forever by my side
You rule my life and write my song
source of strength
comfort bringer
fire that lights my soul
You rule my life and write my song
i love how you use God as a muse, for i do, too. i, personally, think God is the ultimate muse, and when i write a poem, i'm just the instrument through which it is written. i don't know what you could add. it kind of says it all to me! sweet ode to your (our!) muse!
I think I've said this before about something else you wrote, but this sounds like a Psalm. I like it. When you publish your book someday you should have a chapter compiled of these. But I guess as believers our whole lives should be Psalms. Thanx for being a light.
Submission Name: Muse
