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    dots Submission Name: The Weakdots
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    Author: ghostladynessa
    ASL Info:    15/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 8/4/6
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 143
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1181



    Description:
       just a poem...some may think it is depressing, no surprise. I'm really a fairly happy person... i just get alot of my emotion out in peotry form. well ya so... i think i was just having one of those "save me" kind of days when i wrote this


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    dotsThe Weakdots
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    If you cant hold on
    Any longer
    And the days are getting shorter
    The tears you cry they make you scream
    You cant hold on
    I cant hold on
    The end is just a day of rain
    Why am I weak
    Please make me strong
    Without this pain I cant go on
    Out of my mind
    Because ..I know
    its not pain I need
    not pain I need
    Its pain I want
    That scares me so..
    I want to bleed
    I really only want to sleep
    Who doesn't want security..
    Just to feel safe
    Yet on the verge on insanity
    When the closest thing,
    Is pain..
    And that must fill the space
    As you empty your
    Veins
    Of all your shame.
    For the longing
    You have never had,
    Is gone, and
    I hate
    That I cant see the life
    Anymore,
    It used to lurk behind my eyes
    But it has gone away
    Away
    So fucking far away..
    The game,
    It keeps me going, keeps me vain
    Just a lie to stay alive
    Is all they ever told you ..told me.









    Submitted on 2006-04-01 11:04:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      like this, very emotional and yes it does have this underlying current of sadness but beautifully done. Good job.

    Smiles,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]



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