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    dots Submission Name: greydots
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    Author: ghostladynessa
    ASL Info:    15/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 8/4/6
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 113
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 210



    Description:
       just a short thing...i wrote it in late fall, when the world turns to grey


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    Ground is grey, show me love.

    Mind is grey, show me pain.

    Sky is grey, show me happiness.

    Before it all goes away.. the world is dying and im insane.





    Submitted on 2006-04-01 11:06:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it's amazing how we can express ourselves in such a way. sometimes you don't need a lot of words or even big words to get the feeling and emotions clear to the reader.

    great job.
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by secretdream0 | [ Reply to This ]
      hahahahaahahahahaaaaa, i mean sorry, i shouldn't laugh, its kind of depressing but still ,it's really good, it put a smile on my face. its fantastic how sometimes a very short poem says a thousand words huh?

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    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by ParLon | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this write. It has a sense of both pain and happiness. It's short, but it gets your message across right away. Good work.

    -Brandee-
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by imaginarylight6 | [ Reply to This ]



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