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    dots Submission Name: LoveLessdots
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    Author: Ryou_Bakura
    ASL Info:    16/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 35/43/13
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 198
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 661



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       I'm under contract with a publishing company and I want your reviews. this poem came straight fro mmy head so I know it need some editing, please tell me. I accept all types of reviewing.


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    dotsLoveLessdots
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    Those who feel no emotion,
    Them that sacrifice them selves
    Those that feel the real pain,
    And take it from the others.

    They are the ones,
    Who feel not what others feel,
    They can’t feel your love,
    And never ever will.

    They watch you in wonder,
    They want to know that feeling,
    But no one has the time,
    In this busy age,
    To teach them the compassion they need.

    They wander,
    They are the problem solvers,
    They know everything,
    And everyone asks them for help,
    When truly they should be asking them selves.





    Submitted on 2006-04-01 22:58:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey ryou i love this!!!
    amanda
    | Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by allmine | [ Reply to This ]
      hi, this Empathic poem is very good. poe
    | Posted on 2006-10-23 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]



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