this is going on my fave list. i never thought of it like that. it's pretty short but it speaks volumes. i guess i've been lifeless a few times in my life or maybe i was just being melodramatic. whatever. great time babe
....I see the meaning of the whole dead theme... but the poem seems a bit lazy.... It's very short, seems a little decent... just put some more attention towards words of the poem... -nik
You are not lifeless, Hannah! You are one of the most vibrant, lively people I know. I know that yo *feel* lifeless, but I have come to realize that knowledge is often more important than feelings. But either way, I'm not going to tell you what to feel or what to know. Just remember, I've felt as lifeless as you do, and I love you I'm here to talk to if you want. You have my number.
Submission Name: Dead Living
