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    dots Submission Name: All Things Will Changedots
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    Author: Roberto Santos
    ASL Info:    18/Male/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 118/159/75
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 767
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1344



    Description:
       I wrote this song to release pent up creative energy during the exams. A tune has been composed for this, and who knows, maybe one day it could be famous. :)


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    dotsAll Things Will Changedots
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    Itís another dull morning
    And I donít feel like wakiní
    Iím tired of this life
    I donít feel like liviní.
    One of these days Iím gonna
    Throw it all away
    Iíll break free from these chains
    Iíll live it my way.

    I tell you my friend
    Donít be disheartened
    Itís all gonna change
    Coz a new day is startiní
    Iím sure that
    (With time) all things will change.

    Itís a bad day at work
    I just feel exhausted
    I canít do what I like
    Another day is wasted.
    One of these days Iím gonna
    Throw it all away
    Iím gonna walk out of everythiní
    Iíll live it my way.

    I tell you my friend
    Donít be disheartened
    Itís all gonna change
    Coz a new day is startiní
    Iím sure that
    (With time) all things will change.

    Itís a brand new day
    Everythiní feels just right
    Iím in the driverís seat
    You better hold on tight.
    This is the day Iím gonna
    Throw it all away
    This is my life
    Iím gonna live it my way!

    I tell you my friend
    Donít be disheartened
    Itís all gonna change
    Coz a new day is startiní
    Iím sure that
    (With time) all things will change.




    Submitted on 2006-04-02 12:07:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is pretty cool. It has a nice flow to it. I think it could actually be a real song one day. Keep up the good work.

    -megan-
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by PolaroidMemory | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm particularly moved by the rhythm of this piece.It keeps the reader in that sombre mood.

    -siwe
    | Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by Siwe | [ Reply to This ]


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