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    dots Submission Name: satan's child<revised>dots
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    Author: pennymarie
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 244/184/43
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Story/
    Total Views: 185
    Average Vote:    4.3333
    Bytes: 751



    Description:
       good vs Evil


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    Angel’s wings
    Gliding in the
    Night..
    Chasing
    Fire flies
    A beautiful
    Sight..
    Silhouette
    Falls on the
    River below
    presence of
    evil sores
    above stone

    blood drips from
    the wound..
    left behind..
    Imprinted
    In the mud
    a battle did
    Waged
    Along an
    empty
    Stream bed

    Thirsty for
    Rapture
    To carry
    Away what is
    Good vs. evil
    Left for dead…

    and now .....
    contaminated
    by hell
    lost without
    hope...
    At his mercy
    to be
    declared..

    Satans' child




    Submitted on 2006-04-02 13:57:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i think this flowed rather well.... it was really good!
    *terrik
    | Posted on 2007-03-24 00:00:00 | by yamifox | [ Reply to This ]
      Yep. It's solid.

    Unconventional metre, but it reads excellently well. This is good.

    Good stuff!

    -Jay-
    | Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by PretzelCorps | [ Reply to This ]
      This was great! I like the whole good vs Evil thing! Made me think a little and smile anyway keep up the great work.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      I do not believe in Satan though I do believe in good and evil. I think that we all carry god and satan within ourselves. We choose whether we will use the good or the evil. This said, this is a beautiful poem. It reads easily and glides off my tongue. Good Work. Lynn
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by greensnake | [ Reply to This ]



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