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    Author: joshklinger
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 71
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1210



    Description:
       a peice about a girl, like most of my writing. thank you for viewing.


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    come alone
    in the dark evening
    when the air bites
    at your exposed skin
    like mosquitos flying in
    the middle of winter.

    come alone and we’ll
    see whose a winner

    i don’t want drugs anymore
    or sex or friends or love
    anymore. i don’t want to wake up
    in the morning and feel
    like i do anymore
    so come alone, into the
    darkness of winter
    with me
    and we’ll see
    whose gonna lose.

    i don’t want these fucked up
    words or feelings anymore
    the more i say the more
    decay i throw into the blender
    where i was born,
    and i just don’t want to
    see you in here dying with me
    a second longer.

    i’ve got a dirty room
    and some pills to take
    and i can’t quite grasp
    the meaning of our games

    anymore

    so come with me,
    come alone
    in the dark evening
    when the air bites
    at your exposed skin
    like mosquitos flying in
    the middle of winter
    and we’ll find out
    whose the winner
    of these games
    we’ve been playing.




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