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    dots Submission Name: Indignation Judgement I-IVdots
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    Author: Finnigan
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 151/62/13
    Words: 524
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 2260
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 2644



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       Another one of my poems, this time it's serious.


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    dotsIndignation Judgement I-IVdots
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    Ind. Judgement I
    To face me is to face defeat itself. I am fear. Although fear can be conquered, fear will never leave. It's always there. Let there be no death that has no fair trial. In the name of God: Ye not guilty. Let go of emotions and be free. Let your mind be free of stress and difficulty. Go with the ebb and flow. For all I care, you can go shove, because it's not important to me. I only do this so can release stress from the mind, body, and soul. I may live as a warrior but I will strive to be a hero at the end. In this end, it does really matter. It doesn't matter if I win or lose, it's how I learn from the experience. I'll break free and fly away from my sins. When I do, I will become something celestial, something like heaven. Yea, like heaven.


    Ind. Judgement II
    I am a free spirit. No one can tame me. I am like the lightning that strikes down, I will appear anywhere I want to. I could have self-control but I choose not to. I choose my path and it is my path alone. Those who judge the way I go are part of their own storm, or they are just part of the wind. Those who try to contain me will always fail, I am something that you cannot contain. You may contain the physical form but you can never get a constant control on my mind and soul.


    Ind. Judgement III
    I am here to dance freely, I am here on this world to follow my path and my path only, I may stumble along someone else's path, but that is not for long. I am my own storm, my own gust of wind. When the storm dies out, there will still be wind like when I die, my spirit will be in those who remember me. Of course one day that wind dies, and I am forgotten. I do not fear death, that is what makes me a great gust of a gail. Keep those that you love and cherish by you as you won't be there for them always.


    Ind. Judgement IV
    Live up life to the fullest. We can never live in this world. You may think that the world is cruel or nice but it is neither. You will endure both of good and evil, nice or cruel as the world has many options. Whenever there is an alpha there is an omega. The alpha and omega symbolize the beginning and the end. Our storm must subside sometime but it is undicided when it is. But to a omega there is another alpha, a new start. We must subside from animation with our bodies and live up a new life. It is a new storm like the last one but it will choose a different air current. We cannot live in eternal pain and suffer that is why I must live up life up to the best and hope that I die happily.




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      I only do this so can release stress from the mind, body, and soul. I may live as a warrior but I will strive to be a hero at the end. In this end, it does really matter. It doesn't matter if I win or lose, it's how I learn from the experience.

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    I only do this so > I < can release stress from the mind, body, and soul. I may live as a warrior but I will strive to be a hero at the end. In this end, it does really matter. It doesn't matter if I win or lose, it's how I learn from the experience.

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    Your wise finny Boy, very wise. Just incase you ever wondered why I enjoy your company so much, that's why. Your fun, calm, sweet, funny, and wise all in one. I am awed by you and I must say, I wish I could be some what like you in some ways.
    | Posted on 2009-07-01 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmmm, I remember writing this in my AIM profile like a long time ago, that was amazing.
    | Posted on 2009-06-16 00:00:00 | by Finnigan | [ Reply to This ]
      Seriously intelligent, makes me feel so small compared to you not going to lie xD but I loved it, it gave me a lot of emotion reading this and made me feel as if you put some of my own thoughts into this. I couldn't write like this, it'd probably take forever since I'm not as good on puting words and sentencing together. Sorry if this sounds all akward and what not, i'm a bit drowsy today hence the coffee lol. greet job and keep thinking :D *totally adding to favorites!*
    | Posted on 2009-01-14 00:00:00 | by asianpridec209 | [ Reply to This ]
      My goodness. You know initially I just thought this would be like normal serious poetry, honestly the sheer power of simple words can just come out and whack the reader..

    Fear is an illusion, and really, there is nothing to fear but fear itself. It grabs you and holds you until you realise you can release its grip and break free, fly away, yeah, just like heaven.

    and endowed by their Creator with certain inalienable rights, such as life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness.
    We are free. Just like the first Ind. Judgement says.

    Never have I felt words penetrate as deep as yours have.
    I will definitely be back for more.
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      Never have I seen someone of my own years hold such...intelligence as I do. I have fallen in love with your words. I will continue to read them. I hope to find more things so beautiful as this. Continue to show the world your views because you may find another, who shares the same ones....
    | Posted on 2006-06-14 00:00:00 | by SitaSinclaire | [ Reply to This ]


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