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    dots Submission Name: fool no moredots
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    Author: secret kisses
    ASL Info:    22/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558/438/138
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 692
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    Bytes: 939



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       i know bout my spelling, but this is how i talk, ta x x x x


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    dotsfool no moredots
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    boy i dont have to listen
    why dont you go tell that other girl uve bin kissing,
    cos i donat wanna stay,
    get back with you? no way
    i cant take it no more,
    gonna get my case, and gonna walk right out that door.

    boy you were foolish
    all my love you ever had, ur gonna miss it,
    all the while my heart you were breaking it,
    with all the love you were out making.

    im not gonna be your fool no more,
    i will find someone else for sure,
    you know your gonna miss me,
    but i aint cummin back no more.

    you talked bout having second chances,
    but im sure that was your third,
    i gave you all you ever needed,
    but you wanted more from other girls.

    im not gonna be your fool no more
    i will find someone else for sure,
    you know your gonna miss me,
    but i aint cummin back no more!




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      Nice venting. make sure you dont go back to him after this. I have never felt that way about a girl. I hope i am never that kind ofo fool. If someone aint feelin me, then let me know, i just move on and wish the best on both sides. Love is blinding though/it can be sometimes. Your rhymes were good. I like the anger

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    | Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]


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