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    dots Submission Name: Don't Judge Medots
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    Author: PolaroidMemory
    ASL Info:    18/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 99/93/28
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Misc/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 199
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 893



    Description:
       I wrote this non-rhyming poem for a friend of mine who goes through a lot, but she never lets it get her down. I think she's a strong person and she wrote a similar poem like this for me.


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    dotsDon't Judge Medots
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    I walk through this place
    Not know what people think of me
    And not really caring about their thoughts.
    They seem to stare and wonder about me
    But I ignore their curious looks.
    The only thing I worry about is myself
    And getting to where I need to go.
    There are hard times in everyone's lives.
    Not just my own.
    I know that people don't understand me.
    I don't understand why they care
    About my actions and who I talk to.
    But if I talk to the wrong person,
    They will be sure to let me know.
    It seems that they would
    Choose my friends for me if they were given the chance.
    They will not bring me down.
    I will not shed a tear
    As they laugh and snicker about my looks.
    For I am my own person
    And I will not be judged
    By anyone but myself.




    Submitted on 2006-04-02 15:07:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It was...um...a little rough at the least. I wish you would have used a different form. It was really hard to read since some of the lines were broken, some rhymed (I know you said it didn't rhym) and some seemed too far out of context. With that said, it was unique. It's nice to know that people are able to withstand the oppression of certain "circles" in school.
    Cheers,
    ~Persephone~
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]
      hey bubz this was sweet, people only pick on others because of thier own in securities, its best to ignore them, i know its hard, but by doing that it shows that you are a stronger person than they could ever be, thanx for sharing,
    keep smiling
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]



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