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    dots Submission Name: Winged Wonderdots
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    Author: sugar-n-spice
    Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 55/49/8
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Description:
       Sometimes it needs the innocence of a child to unravel a complex thought... and to rely on that innocence is sometimes necessary in order to convey a moment of truth.


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    dotsWinged Wonderdots
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    sure winged whisper
    of my whimsical world
    carry this wish
    to the edge
    of infinite spheres and
    ruthless judgements

    to rest sympathetically
    on the freckled nose
    of a wide-eyed child




    Submitted on 2006-04-03 09:59:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aww.. that is adorable... I can just see a fairy landing on my nieces nose :)
    and you say in your description about the innocence of a child, the imagination that we all try to keep hold of but often lose it to adulthood. some of us keep it tho... Im proud to be one of them :)
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    | Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, I know the feeling...having some thought that you think is complex and you find yourself overthinking it, then a lil kid comes along and does or says something that makes it all make sense. HA! Anyway, thats just what I get from this and I thought you put it together exceptionally. Cool write!
    | Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Winged whisper? hummm...Is it a sprite...a numph...a winged wish? resting on the freckled nose of a child...Does that mean only children can see?
    Sound like childhood fantasy.....I like that...Never loose yourself....Childhood is what magic is made of....
    | Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by smalltown | [ Reply to This ]
      While browsing, this piece caught my eye. I like its simplistic reasoning in the last part.. that after reading the first part it brings it all down to what is life.. the beauty and magic, as seen through the eyes of a child.
    | Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]


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