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    dots Submission Name: My Prayerdots

    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I pray to my lord many times a day. Here lately I have been feeling lost, like my life has little meaning, and this poem was written to help me remember that God is always there for me, and I mean something to him. Thats all that matters

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    dotsMy Prayerdots

    Dear father in heaven,
    Hear my words tonight.
    Thank you for what you've given
    Thanks for helping with my fright

    Take my worries and rid of them.
    Show me the path I should take.
    Pull the hard times from my memories,
    Show me a new world when I wake.

    Happiness is all I really desire.
    But alone I can't find my way.
    Watch over my family, keep them safe.
    So I may have peace in my day.

    Keep me safe from the evil,
    That walks these streets.
    Hold my hand as I go through the day
    Help me stay on both my feet.

    Thank you for listening my Lord.
    Thank you for being by my side
    You have given me a wonderful life,
    No longer will I run and hide.

    Submitted on 2006-04-03 12:32:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      We (Christains) all pray this poem so many times daily, thank you for putting it into words for us. I came to you by way of community-oh what a lovely addition!-I like what you write,keep itup!
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]

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