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    dots Submission Name: I Believe in Fairy Talesdots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I found this in one of my old journals. It was written for my husband. He saved me from a life of misery, and I love him for it. His love inspires alot of my peoms. Its so wonderful to believe.


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    dotsI Believe in Fairy Talesdots
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    Those beings in heaven,
    With angels, halos and wings,
    I didn't believe in them,
    They were all fairy tale things.

    Happily ever after,
    Only happened in the books.
    Prince charming was a fake,
    Love was a filthy crook.

    None of this was real,
    Nothing good was true,
    Having lived opposite of happy,
    But I believe, because of you.

    You saved me from myself,
    Kept me safe from harm.
    I have been shown what happiness is,
    It wasn't a dream or a charm.

    Living with you, sharing this love,
    Has made me believe in fairy tales,
    I live in one, a unique wonderland,
    In my story, love always prevails.




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      The flow of this poem was very nice and I liked the imagery. I know this sounds corny but I felt the poem...its like it made me feel hopeless but then when I got to the happy part it made me happy. I liked this poem. Thanks for the comment on 'Control'<3Sarah

    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by Sarah J | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree with the person that commented not all love has to be bad no but when they are they crush you...see all life and love its all a risk if you have the courage to love you have to courage to be heartbroken just something i came up with ive been in lov dont no if u knew that but ive been in love 3 times first relationship i was 15 years old and for me the whole puppy love because your so young [censored] that i loved that girl and her daughter but she broke my heart then the girl here i met i was 15 still didnt feel like i can love but after 2 years i did love again only to be heartbroken 17 years old with a piece of heart left got into a relationship greatst woman ever broke me again all of them scared of commitment and they were the ones wanting it i should be dead inside but im not i still have the courage to love and you show that here good job sweetheart......thank you
    | Posted on 2006-06-17 00:00:00 | by wallya20 | [ Reply to This ]
      Living with you, sharing this love,
    Has made me believe in fairy tales,
    I live in one, a unique wonderland,
    In my story, love always prevails

    i'm in relationship but deadly terrified of committment. i've just seen too many relationships go bad. but this poem made me see that not all relationships have to be bad. i kind of gives me hope that i might find a love like that one day.

    i like how natural it sounded. you could tell it came from the heart.
    | Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by secretdream0 | [ Reply to This ]


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