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    dots Submission Name: Dailydots
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    Author: greenlantern
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 4/1/6
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 130
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       I was particularly proud of this one, but I'm not quite sure why. It came to me when I was sitting in lunch one day, so I hurriedly grabbed a paper and pen and scribbled it down... thoughts?


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    dotsDailydots
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    Seedlings of me, who I used to be
    Have washed away with the leaves on the sea
    To be seen in clips and phrases
    And felt at the edge of memory
    A sweet taste for these parched lips
    I take these hands, these fingertips
    And do my day’s work
    Unraveling, undone
    It is time to take what I have won?
    Traveling from cloud to cloud
    Is not my way to live
    I am destined for something else
    I have to trust in Him




    Submitted on 2006-04-03 15:35:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can see why you are proud of this one it's really good. The imagery in it is really amazing, really refreshing actually. A good write really, very comforting.

    Smiles,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      ^_^pretty.
    the imagery is nice and natural.i liked the way it started,it was interesting,and so is the ending.wonder what that day's work could be..keep up.^_^
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by raineces | [ Reply to This ]



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