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    dots Submission Name: Remembrancedots
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    Author: greenlantern
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 4/1/6
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 121
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       I was trying a different sort of flow with this one... I'm not really sure if it worked out lol... thoughts, comments, concerns?


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    dotsRemembrancedots
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    Her body’s burning
    Caught on fire by cells
    They wrap themselves in elastic memory
    She might make it to tomorrow, if all is well
    But time takes the best of us
    A living star has turned to rust
    The life she gave, her efforts persuade
    She may be gone, but her soul lives on
    In the shared blood of kin
    Enemies can conquer only if you give in
    The representative has died, yet lessons survive
    In the memories of things that have been.




    Submitted on 2006-04-03 15:37:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked the message behind this, people may be gone but their memories still live on. Good write. It was somethng special.

    Peace,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      i wonder who that 'she' is..hm,must be someone who passed away?oh well,although this is short it's got substance.last two lines were catchy.i think this is nice..i don't understand why there had been no comments.you write nicely you know..tkecre!
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by raineces | [ Reply to This ]



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