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    dots Submission Name: Train Track Vagabonddots
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    Author: greenlantern
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 4/1/6
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 112
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       I was musing when I wrote this one... it just sort of came out.


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    dotsTrain Track Vagabonddots
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    My honey, you’re a star now
    You can’t stay here anymore
    Because we’ve all loved you time and again
    But you’ve had your chance on this floor

    Make your way into the streets with dying lights
    Make a name for yourself, make us all proud
    Just one girl with too many faces
    You live in a lie behind the shroud

    But your merry-go-round has stopped
    The music dies, and the noise in your head fades
    Pick up your shit and dry your eyes
    It’s time to move on with your soul parade




    Submitted on 2006-04-03 15:42:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a really clever write
    I take this write as describing one who has refound the love of live
    They are not happy with their meager surrondings and once again wish to better their life
    This is very encouraging and shows with Love one can do anything
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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