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    Author: ellesmera
    ASL Info:    18. Female. England
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 43/263/115
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
    Total Views: 845
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 398



    Description:
       lol. and i meen MAJOR random thought,
    but seriosly, it is funny,

    innit?

    come on it has to make you lagh...
    just a little?


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    I'm living somwhere cold,
    somewhere dark,
    it not only doubles, but triples,
    the beat of my heart,
    the breathing,
    short,
    the smell,
    foul,
    then i see,
    thedisgusting thing,
    sitting upright,
    but barley human,
    i close the door,
    and creep in,
    further,
    further,
    in to my brothers lair...




    Submitted on 2006-04-04 08:26:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      OMG!you sound like some one i know momma,mom,papa just playing(serioursly) but great work look up 1 i wrote called crazy sin yep intersting name stupid. ahh now i sound like i have a spilt pers. gottago.
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by century | [ Reply to This ]


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