Kaleidoscope

Author: Emerging Soul ASL Info:    48/VERY female/Wisconsin Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1240 /1114 /244 Words: 96

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Kaleidoscope

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She sits on the floor with brush and paint And colors her world in neon shades The vibrant yellow of alive The mint green of envy The liquid silver of desire The turquoise blue of introspection Playing a giant game of "Twister" Left hand here Right foot there Heeding the spin of the dial Until she falls Upon the colors of her world Her arms move Her legs move Painted angel upon the cloth of her heart Until the imprint is all that remains Kaleidoscope of life upon her back How fitting

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ummm... the end had me a wee bit confused, but i like the idea of the many colors... it brightens my day... :) -dandan

| Posted on 2004-05-06 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]

I too like the images of colorsful emotion. You've captured several different emotions here, but the one I feel the most is almost helplessness, as though she is trapped into doing this, despite the beautiful colors she is living with and using.

| Posted on 2004-05-13 00:00:00 | by Athalia | [ Reply to This ]

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