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Author: Emerging Soul
ASL Info:    48/VERY female/Wisconsin
Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1240 /1114 /244
Words: 96
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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She sits on the floor with brush and paint
And colors her world in neon shades
The vibrant yellow of alive
The mint green of envy
The liquid silver of desire
The turquoise blue of introspection
Playing a giant game of "Twister"
Left hand here
Right foot there
Heeding the spin of the dial
Until she falls
Upon the colors of her world
Her arms move
Her legs move
Painted angel upon the cloth of her heart
Until the imprint is all that remains
Kaleidoscope of life upon her back
How fitting

Submitted on 2004-05-06 07:23:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ummm... the end had me a wee bit confused, but i like the idea of the many colors... it brightens my day... :)
| Posted on 2004-05-06 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]
  I too like the images of colorsful emotion. You've captured several different emotions here, but the one I feel the most is almost helplessness, as though she is trapped into doing this, despite the beautiful colors she is living with and using.
| Posted on 2004-05-13 00:00:00 | by Athalia | [ Reply to This ]

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