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    Author: century
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 3/6/4
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 720
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 385



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       UM.........SEE...............UM.......DON'T KNOW!


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    if the heat too hot,
    if you burn,and burn
    if you bones rot.
    it your turn.

    if squres in pants scare you
    if lies make you crepped
    if mice with shoes
    take turns to beat

    then you should fight
    and you should cry
    you should yell with all your might
    this is a showdown, just come on and try!




    Submitted on 2006-04-04 17:26:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey rae guess what i know your inspiration me! no just kiddin the ultimate showdown right (dont say no...)
    love carol
    | Posted on 2006-04-05 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      Brilliant...like a cheerleader with a chip on her shoulder. you are a genius, my Sweet Perfect Princess!!! i miss you sooo much and have told your Real Grandfather, Grampa Wine all about how wonderful you kids are!!! love and kisses, hugs and misses, fairy wishes, Mom
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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