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    dots Submission Name: her side of the storydots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 647/1087/624
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 189
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsher side of the storydots
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    on the cold floor, sipping champagne spiked with shame
    knees pressed to the tile, she finds herself to blame
    she just wants to tell her side of the story

    they ask "how was your day" and leave
    before she opens her mouth
    people say "hello"
    thats not a question
    everyone says "hows it going"
    noone really wants to know
    she just wants to tell her side of the story

    her side of the story, memories unchained
    she still finds herself to blame

    what did you do today? i cried
    why is everything your fault? im always wrong
    why are you wrong? i lie
    why do you lie? truth hurts, and i cant stand anything worse than this
    why does truth hurt? ive been wrong before
    why cant you breathe? im suffocating on pain





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      i fel you also i understand you but for those who don't i suggest that you ask the question and answer it at the same time within the same line this will also help you poetry and your mind use your writing as a sorce of therpy use it to challenge your mental to open your mind and always remeber yu are a great writer but it always good to challenge yourself.
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by emcgehee78 | [ Reply to This ]


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