If the werewolves would howl

Author: darkness ASL Info:    19/F/my own world Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 524 /218 /40 Words: 94

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If the werewolves would howl

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Feeling like shit I was never ment to fly but, am I tall enough to stand? The dark shall calm me and hope shall return to my soul Only If the werewolves would howl and break my sickining silence. If I could cry... If my tears would flow If the atmosphere would change Where losers were destined to be without a story to tell where zombies rome droning in sheer bliss Never to be zombified When hate and love are the same To conquer the feeling of emtyness one must?...

Submitted on 2006-04-04 21:09:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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zombified I like it! good read . i think wolves are cool this poem also realy distances the reader through past memory of anguish in a persons life i realy feel it no cheesie comments intended.

| Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by temporal nights | [ Reply to This ]

One can't actually be "zombiefied" unless one is dead really, maybe that was your point? Silence is beautiful, just take the time to listen to it. As for the werewolves howling.... AROOOOOO. Cheers, Azuire

| Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]

oh and by the way... the whole werewolves thing that i used in my other poem.... i was wondering where i got it from. but it looks like i found out. sorry... i read this poem like along time ago and i must have remembered somethin about howling werewolves... my bad ttyl

| Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]

ill comment later... but it was awesome

| Posted on 2006-04-21 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]

Hey, this is pretty cool. I'm so happy you told me to read this! I really reallyliked it! This was a pretty sweet werewolf write. I actually liked how it jumped around, it made me think more. Awesome, keep writing.

| Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]

hhuummm very different but I enjoy a good werewolve story or movie.. this for me kinda jumps around but catchy too so maybe I'll read it again at a different time and see if it hits me differently .. but I did like it peace ~ penny

| Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by pennymarie | [ Reply to This ]

How dare you blame this on us! We the boncyballs have nothing against the werewolves or you. Why would you say such a discouraging word, AND THE SKIES ARE NOT CLOUDY ALL DAY! BOUNCE! I cannot believe that you need werewolves to break your sickening silences! All you need is... BOUNCYBALLS! BOUNCE! Do not cry anymore. Do not fear the zombies. Do not fear the silence. Do not fear the bouncyballs! BOUNCE!

| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]

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