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    dots Submission Name: If the werewolves would howldots
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    Author: darkness
    ASL Info:    19/F/my own world
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 524/218/40
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 215
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 598



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       I was kinda depressed.
    But now im over iyt.
    And the werewolves and dinosaurs are back.
    yeahhh...


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    dotsIf the werewolves would howldots
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    Feeling like shit
    I was never ment to fly
    but, am I tall enough to stand?
    The dark shall calm me
    and hope shall return to my soul
    Only If the werewolves would howl
    and break my sickining silence.

    If I could cry...
    If my tears would flow
    If the atmosphere would change
    Where losers were destined to be
    without a story to tell
    where zombies rome
    droning in sheer bliss

    Never to be zombified
    When hate and love are the same
    To conquer the feeling of emtyness one must?...




    Submitted on 2006-04-04 21:09:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      zombified I like it! good read . i think wolves are cool this poem also realy distances the reader through past memory of anguish in a persons life i realy feel it no cheesie comments intended.
    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by temporal nights | [ Reply to This ]
      One can't actually be "zombiefied" unless one is dead really, maybe that was your point?
    Silence is beautiful, just take the time to listen to it.
    As for the werewolves howling....

    AROOOOOO.

    Cheers,
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      oh and by the way... the whole werewolves thing that i used in my other poem.... i was wondering where i got it from. but it looks like i found out. sorry... i read this poem like along time ago and i must have remembered somethin about howling werewolves... my bad

    ttyl
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
      ill comment later... but it was awesome
    | Posted on 2006-04-21 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, this is pretty cool. I'm so happy you told me to read this! I really reallyliked it! This was a pretty sweet werewolf write. I actually liked how it jumped around, it made me think more. Awesome, keep writing.
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      hhuummm very different but I enjoy a good werewolve story or movie.. this for me kinda jumps around but catchy too so maybe I'll read it again at a different time and see if it hits me differently .. but I did like it

    peace ~ penny
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by pennymarie | [ Reply to This ]
      How dare you blame this on us! We the boncyballs have nothing against the werewolves or you. Why would you say such a discouraging word, AND THE SKIES ARE NOT CLOUDY ALL DAY!

    BOUNCE!

    I cannot believe that you need werewolves to break your sickening silences! All you need is...
    BOUNCYBALLS!

    BOUNCE!

    Do not cry anymore. Do not fear the zombies. Do not fear the silence. Do not fear the bouncyballs!

    BOUNCE!
    | Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]


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