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    dots Submission Name: Prayin' For Tomorrowdots
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    Author: lucianraven
    ASL Info:    21/M/Spfld Il
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 49/67/19
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 874
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 388



    Description:
       This is the first of three possible submissions that are out of ym usual vein, haha thats a morbid comment for me, anyway, these are abotu love, and I'm writing them because I'm in love, yay me.. ok well enjoy any feedback is cool.P.s, this is sprta poetry to music but not nessicarily a song yet, so idk...


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    dotsPrayin' For Tomorrowdots
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    A bad start,
    A worse day,
    Nothin' semms,
    To go my way
    Slammin' doors,
    And harsh words,
    Mind is fryin'
    Friends are cryin'
    sometimes ya gotta know when,
    To pray for tomorrow
    Ya' gotta hope,
    For a better day,
    Hope that it'll all
    Be okay....
    Pray for tomorrow....




    Submitted on 2006-04-04 22:00:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your in love. what kind? when i first read the discription i thought it might be a girl. then when i read the lyric i thought of God. so who are you in love with? i like the encougaing message within the contacts.
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    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by snufthepunk28 | [ Reply to This ]


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