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    dots Submission Name: do I love thee ?dots
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    Author: muhammed
    ASL Info:    23/male/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 87/124/111
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 231
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsdo I love thee ?dots
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    do I love thee ?
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    I keep telling the wonder tells of thee
    or I tell it the wonders of me ?
    the tells of love devotion and intimacy
    the same story in different ages and places
    and the same wanderings eyes in different faces

    and they always leave half dreaming broking hearted
    an illusion makes a gleams of hopes and reverie
    feds with half truths half lies
    so when it faced the bold sun it slowly melts
    appearing the shape of what it really been build

    do I still wait for thee ?
    or I just enjoy that looks of envy
    (O do you really love her that much ?)
    (O what lucky girl !)

    they don't love me
    they love my love to thee
    do I love thee ?
    I donot, I do ,may be
    did for thee I still wait ?
    or I'm just afraid




    Submitted on 2006-04-05 02:55:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Poignant. Simply breathtaking true.
    | Posted on 2006-05-25 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree with d-ink it was breathe taking


    fana
    | Posted on 2006-07-20 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this peom/lyric thing. I think your talking about love and how people umm mold it into what it really isn't but what they want to see. good work. :]
    | Posted on 2006-04-17 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]



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