hi long time, you have written alot since the last time i clicked on your page i will take time to read what i've missed.
i havent been doing much other than work i dont spend much time with the writing anymore i think i'm loosing interest and asking myself whats the point everything else is good and hope all is well for you
not bad the first 2 are great, but the 3 and 4th don't measure up quite as well, particualrly in the smoothness. also the end, though it doesn't necessarily hurt, it doesn't help. It is interesting though, how differently the rain effects everybody, take care.
As I believe you know I am a deep lover of the rain I will never stop praising its glory Yhe rain is one of the beautiful gifts God gave us to keep us alive and continue to bring us life I really loved this one done in your own unique style Once again Excellent Job God Bless Ron
ah, i do always enjoy a good hardy rain, and God knows we get plenty of it here! wonderful for the soul and for cleansing and healing, i think. i love the simplicity of this and the obvious reverence you have for nature in all her beauty.
I hear you girlfriend! It is raining here off and on. I am like so close to moving to Florida it is not even funny now. lol. But they got the hurricanes coming in soon...nevermind. This was good and I liked the touch at the end. I hope you get some dry days. Good work.
I was in some stormy, rainy weather this past weekend and found this poem to be surprisingly refeshing, even given the topic
I like the description of "change" this implies. Life can be arid and parched, in great need of quinching waters.. and then a drop falls and creates a surging stream.. once again rejuvenating our minds and hearts.
Well, since we're all tellin nature stories, we've had like 5 tornadoes in the past week, 2 of which were within 20 miles from where I live and the other 3 in my town... so yeah... anyway, I like nature poems, and this one is very good. Keep it up.
hey hows things this was very colorful and its funny where i am it snowed and now it is raining i like your views and poems about nature i guess i really dont spend much time appreciating the elements of mother nature even though i work outside all day
hope all is well with you thanx for yor recent comments sandman
The beginning line where it says "As once was the single drop is now a surging stream" is awsome because it shows the way that nature starts out with a little thing and makes it greater. It reminded me of floods and how ( at least here in Texas) everyone prays for rain and then sometimes when it comes it comes with a rage. Great write.