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thoughtless investments

Author: caspian
ASL Info:    23/m/Denmark
Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 134 /189 /57
Words: 95
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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thoughtless investments

Im a money machine
a shopping center for your thoughtless investments in flesh and blood

Im so hungry I could scream
and all you talk about is food
the smell the taste the satisfaction in your look

Only you see me as the shell i really am
and you fill me up with whatever you can

im the good and you´r the crook
in this discount remake of the 1950´s greatest visual look

im the cowboy on my horse
your the robe around my neck

Submitted on 2006-04-06 03:51:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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