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    dots Submission Name: Remain my Guidedots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       For my Jon. My only guide for as long as I live.


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    dotsRemain my Guidedots
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    I pray every morning that our life isn't a dream,
    Don't want to wake and have it all disappear.
    The love we share deserves to remembered
    Loss of memories and love would be despair so severe.

    My life will end the minute our love crashes.
    Although I will remain a healthy being,
    Inside I will wilt away like a rose in the desert.
    Other forms of love, incapable of seeing.

    You see, my love? You hold it all up.
    The light that only your love provides,
    Keeps me on the path to our future,
    I am asking you to forever remain my guide.




    Submitted on 2006-04-06 06:52:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love...I've felt like this before afraid to wake and find what had seemed so real to have been just a lie..a dream. Like so many things that seemed so real in my dreams. It wasn't unclear to me because I have felt things like this before.
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by net | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very well done. Again I askwhy can't other girls feel this way. I want someone that i can guide but in return i want her to guide me as well because i know and understand i don;t always choose to do the right thing. There are so many different things in love that should be cherished and never to be taken for granted. Even being broken into pieces you never stop wanting to love and to find that person who wants to feel the way you do and share love make it an equal thing. Thats all i ever really want in this life to have a wife i can love and children i can adore. Not into the cheating and all the other propaganda. Just for someone to love and guide me with the same intent i hav for them. Little words can bring great emotion....i love that quote. I'll be back for more.
    | Posted on 2006-06-20 00:00:00 | by wallya20 | [ Reply to This ]


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