Aww..don't let any guy treat you like that Jessy....you should be happy and don't let guys walk all over you...you shouldn't love a guy that does that to you..get away...anyhows this piece was really good..keep up the great work!! ^_^
*tears* this is really sad. im sorry. i gone thru the same thing and yet i thought i loved teh guy it wasnt true. go, walk away from it. seriosly like lostspirt said, "before he does kill you". im so sorry this is soooo sad. i hope you make it and ur life gets better. by the way great write very very good. <3 Kelly
i have tears in my eye honey....my mom let my dad beat her...she died now he beats me...no one deserves this and as long as you have the chioce to get away from it, take it...you can do better and anyone who says different is an insecure [censored]! great job with the rhyming and the flow...this is very touching...
flip this made me cry :*( i had a relationship with a guy and suffered a bloody good beating from him...... im sorry.....get away, start a new life before he does kill you....... Seriously, no man is worth pain God Bless Lotsaluv Nadine i loved this poem........i felt it :)