Description: I found this the other day...it was something I wrote back in fourth grade when we talked about poetry and did it. These were the kind of poems where you come up with a word and write different words to create that word downwards...(mine spells out fast...)
Enjoy my naitivity at the age of ten, the horse loving me.
I liked this because it does come pretty close to a haiku...you may want to trun this into one. It would be very good! For a fourth grader this was some major skills here. I will excuse the spelling, I still have trouble with it. lol. I seriously think you may want to make this into a haiku, it has major potential to be one. Very good.
this is almost a haiku, and not a bad write for a fourth-grader! you could, if you want to, do a little edit and have a powerful haiku. horses are gorgeous creatures, so powerful. i can see them running wild through the field.
This made me think about watching "Deal or No Deal" last night where a guy could have won $200,000 but instead was happy that he took the "deal" of $44,000 and a Pony for his daughter because that was her greatest wish.
He went over to her and did their "special handshake" routine and kissed her and took the deal just to make her happy.