Description: It came to me in a bout 10m minutes i guess.
I know it isnt that catchy.
Its just for realization.
By me.
And i am aware i put periods at the end of every line even if they dont belong there.
I have an obsession lol.
Enjoyyy!!
Ashleeeee<333
The Wishing Well. -------------------------------------------
Change yourself.
Cover the pain.
Forget about it.
Then hurt yourself everyday.
Missing who you were.
Who you gave up.
The joy of finding yourself.
And being completely happy with yourself.
Them making you change.
It's not good enough for the world.
They see it a different way.
Not joyfull at all.
Seeing a little girl.
Throwing pennies in a wishing well.
And your jealous.
She will probably get her wish.
You have so much to wish for.
That will never come true.
She is probably wishing for a candy bar.
Its probably possible.
But wishing for a new life.
Can only go
so
far.
You have a really good concept of the actual writing of the poetry, but you need to work on the punctuation. The periods at the end of each line breaks up the general "flow" of the poem. The periods distract more than enhance the piece. I do like how you worded it; you said a lot in few words, and brought your point across well. Thanks for posting it. I know this is going to sound cliché, but it made my day. I can totally identify!! Keep up the good work!!
Submission Name: The Wishing Well.
