Great poem for writing while you were drunk. Lol. It had awesome imagery! The lines just sounded so beautiful. I will be the sun kissing your moon. That was awesome. I think you have a way with words. I have nothing bad to say about this. Brilliant job. Going on my favs. inkpen
Okay, how sad is this? Your poems you write while you're drunk sound better than mine do when I'm sober. I love the imagery you've used. I'm espicially fond of the, "And I will be the sun kissing your moon. And our love will resuscitate between eclipses."
your were drunk!?!..maybe i should get drunk and try to write something..this was great!..purty good for being drunk..the flow was really nice...i liked the image of the sun kissing the moon, it was really cute and lovey..lol..anyhows i really liked this poem..keep it up! ^.^
mmmÖ.i donít know what to say about these two poems , theyíre good ,I like them , but I didnít love them as much as I did with your others. I guess Iím used to your great awesome poems that a good one didnít seem to be satisfying . anyway , I think if youíre gonna write while youíre drunk , you should improve them later when youíre solver ( itís just my opinion , I may be wrong ) p.s : I liked recoil of the hate more than the other one :) have a nice day ~~Drakoniss~~
I think some of his best stuff has come to him while drinking...although if you live like that you will end up wollowing in yourself like Edgar Allen Poe...allthough he had his drink mixed with a bit of insanity.....I think your poems are amazing i love each and every one...the darkness mixed in with the sweetness....Your my Robert Browning....please dont stop.
Not another drunk poem! lol. You are killing me her. To sugary and strangely morbid. I think your flow is way better in this piece. Actually this piece is just way better than the last one I just read. BUT, it was not as good as your other poems. I have no idea how you can save this one...because there were some good lines in it. All I will say is, give up writing while you are drunk. lol.