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    dots Submission Name: another daydots
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    Author: emoxday
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 113/123/142
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/The pain inside
    Total Views: 166
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 606



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       Its kind of short but I don't know how to add more and still make it sound like it does now? ;O


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    dotsanother daydots
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    my tears are salty
    on face
    another tear
    has fallen down

    another way
    to ease this pain
    it only seems to
    last so long

    I know theres
    people that care
    to much

    but not for me
    and not for you
    but for themselves
    they only care for themselves

    this day will end
    like many do
    but today is different
    today is different

    I sigh with anguish
    as the cuts start to heal
    another day to ease the pain
    another way to feel the pain




    Submitted on 2006-04-06 23:45:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it's a good piece my friend ....have a lot of pain inside
    sad but still beautiful I like the ideas and the way you end it ..keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]



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