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    Author: Kelly17
    ASL Info:    25/f/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 17/8/10
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Romance
    Total Views: 133
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1380



    Description:
       This is something I wrote after "hiding" out with my b/f for awhile until life just kind of blew over


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    Window shades are drawn once more
    Alone in our own private world
    We laugh as though we have no cares
    Talking as if to ourselves
    There are no secrets
    Nothing that I don't think you would understand

    I long for the sense of security
    I feel only when you are around
    The safety that encompasses me
    As you circle your arms around me
    The comfort that comes
    Alone in our private world

    I lay my head down on your chest
    Listening to your heart beat in my ear
    Feeling my head rise and fall
    As you breathe
    Joking with each other
    We laugh as though we have no cares

    I feel loved when I'm with you
    As though no one else can touch me
    I believe that I could fly
    As long as you are behind me
    We open our lives to each other
    Talking as if to ourselves

    We have created this special bond
    One that can't be forgotten
    A safety net
    For both of us
    Knowing I can tell you anything
    There are no secrets

    Window shades are drawn once more
    Alone in our own private world
    We laugh as though we have no cares
    Talking as if to ourselves
    There are no secrets
    Nothing that I don't think you would understand




    Submitted on 2006-04-07 08:24:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There is no other feeling in the world as like being with and spending time with the one you love. You captured this sentiment very well. A very good write indeed.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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