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    dots Submission Name: Infidelitydots
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    Author: Johnny 5
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 25/20/9
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Prose/Betrayal
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    Description:
       both sides of a relationship marred by infidelity


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    dotsInfidelitydots
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    Fragment, remnant of your concern
    Your exploited redundant bliss
    Why do you not care?and Why do you not listen?
    A passe revolution
    Too heavily thought-out.
    Okay--
    Dissension inside.
    Dissolution out.
    Abomination of a detestation
    Left alone again.
    Why do you leave? and Why do you come back?
    This destitution only discreates the pain.




    Submitted on 2006-04-07 09:24:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was sweet dude. seriously deep. undertones of annoyment though. what brought this on?
    id ditch the and in the second to last line and just leave the two questions. other than that it killed.
    | Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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