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All of the anothers

Author: stormkrow
ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51 /52 /39
Words: 430
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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These poems are looking at all of the daily anothers that we all have in our lifes .
and this is what came about
hope you like it

All of the anothers

All of the Anothers parts one and two

Another act inthis play called life your part ending with tradgity
Another chance at peace
Another chance to prove our devotion to our chossen path
Another sceen in this act of life
Another score to our song that we sing through out life
Another try at living an uneventful life
so many anothers in our lives
Another life waisted away by youths uncontroled flow
Another way to find my life
Another love gained Another one lost
Another passing year
Another challange yet to pass
many times we don't see our anothers we just look for our firsts and our lasts we just over look our anothers
Another death for me to die
Another addiction
Another stage to sing my song
Another love reborn from the ashes
Another night I lie awake .....
All of the anothers part # 2
No more anothers

Another night I lie awake
my sences fighting for control
my body feels like it is on fire
my nerves are shot
may be that is why i waz told not to do crack
it feels like I am high but I know that i am not because i am still alive
Another dissisioin that I must make about adding more to my "plate"
I just need to get away for awhile but I am trapped in this hell for all eternity . Even when I die i 'll stay here cuz this life i am living is hell
Another time I look for a way out and suicide seems like my only way to get away but why you might ask do you think that it will benifit you
Another nod as I say yes it would you give up on me and I see my only way left open to me now
Another try but this time I die and you start to cry you think what if I would have given him another chance to as kfor help maybe he'd still be alive today
Another time , Another place another night
another chance Another life snuffed out by suicied
Another statistic is what I 've become
Another bare branch on my family tree always and forever dead
the end

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