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Author: Psyve
ASL Info:    53/M/ Bahrain
Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 75 /102 /60
Words: 130
Class/Type: Lyrics /Being a Teen
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You never thought you’d look for love,
You were sure t’would look for you,
You were too goddamned handsome to be true-
And everybody said
You’d a classic Grecian head
And you found no cause to be disbelieve them too…

So now you cannot understand why people
Act the way they do,
Your mother always told you you’re the best-
And every time you look, the Mirror
Says the same thing too,
Which makes you want to disregard the rest…

But you lately got the feeling that you
Ain’t quite got them reeling
Underneath your photogenic smile –
And now, you realize, as you
Watch the curtain rise:
Your audience hall’s been empty quite some while . . . . .

Submitted on 2006-04-07 14:06:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  it's always hard to visualise the music you may have written for this. As lyrics go, I like em, tells a good story, with a nice moral, so well done. Goddamned is fine with me

be happy

| Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
  An interesting write
The only thing I would change is the use of the word G D
I would change it to darn
I find it sad that someone would live their life solely for others enjoyment
I find that to be one of the biggest factors of depression
God Bless
| Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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