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    dots Submission Name: Mother Naturedots
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    Author: bleeding-soul
    ASL Info:    17/m/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 94/94/14
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
    Total Views: 939
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 419



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    dotsMother Naturedots
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    Breathe in the fresh air of the morning after the rain. Let the refreshing mist wrap your skin in a cloth of eternal comfort. Feel the wind beat upon your face and wipe away the painful expressions of the past. Let the sun warm your soul and your heart....making them more compassionate than before. Love like you've never loved. Taste life and happiness in Nature. Let Mother Nature caress you in her arms.




    Submitted on 2006-04-07 16:22:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thats very beautiful. I like it
    | Posted on 2006-05-24 00:00:00 | by __B3cca__ | [ Reply to This ]
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    Breathe in the fresh air of the morning after the rain. Let the refreshing mist wrap your skin in a cloth of eternal comfort. Feel the wind beat upon your face and wipe away the painful expressions of the past. Let the sun warm your soul and your heart....making them more compassionate than before. Love like you've never loved. Taste life and happiness in Nature. Let Mother Nature caress you in her arms.


    ballsnacher
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by ballsnacher | [ Reply to This ]
      wow....beautiful........i love mother nature......when im feeling like crap i look up at the sky and its amazing how many times i have done that on really bad days and a rainbow has appeared or a ray of sun has come through the clouds......i loved this poem :)
    Love
    Nadine
    | Posted on 2006-04-24 00:00:00 | by lostspirit | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really pretty Steven. I loved your descritions, I loved the passion in this. It was sooo lovely and I think you should totally write more like this.
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      The words flow great together. It's almost like the words reaches out to caress you. Yeah I definitely like this...the imagery just sort of soothes you. You should more things like this. You're a good writer. Peace out!

    Mr. Chuckles
    | Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by Draigon | [ Reply to This ]
      this flows very nicely. it's a great stream of consciousness. and it sounds very soothing, definately well worded. short and sweet. nice job.
    peace.
    meredith.
    | Posted on 2006-04-08 00:00:00 | by art_is_hard | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful words and a great anthem to people feeling down. I love feeling the sun's warmth and realising all things cosmic.

    I didn't like "kool" it's not right for the piece.

    Otherwise, excellent tgoughts

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is an excellent write,its very relaxing to read and gives the reader a feeling of bring out dorrs with nature,keep up the good works I really enjoyed this read
    adnil
    | Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]
      This was quite soothing. It gave me a sense of renewal and comfort as I read this. For deep thoughts, this was very well worded and it made me think about how being outside can ease all worries if you relax and take in all the beauty around you. Thanks for sharing.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-04-07 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah, Mother Nature is my fourth favourite Mother. She is cool, and I think you made that clear. She is responsible for almost all the wonders in the world, and they are amazing. When I look around and see such diverse landscape, from mountains over 8000meters in the North of my country, to coastal plains at sea level towards the south, it is quite mind-boggling to just think about how she managed. You made all this very clear in your deep and clear write, with a good word choice. I would like if you took a look at a write of mine. Thanks


    Abbas
    | Posted on 2006-06-05 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]


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