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    Author: simpson kid
    ASL Info:    15/m/Central cal
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 6/9/10
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 191
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    Who do you think you are?
    One day you just walk into my life
    And have power over me
    You think you can do that
    You think I won’t resist
    Well here’s a little secret
    No body likes you
    Not me
    Not my mother
    Not my friends
    NO ONE
    The only reason you are around
    Is because you clean the house
    That’s right you are my mothers BITCH
    But you still try to control me
    Try to tell me what I can and can’t do
    You are not my father
    You make me want to kick sand in your face
    You are noting but a worthless disgrace




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      OH, GOD I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL...BUT ACTUALLY ITS THE OTHER WAY AROUND WITH THE STEP MOM THATS A BIG REASON WHY WE DON'T GET ALONG I LIKED THIS POEM ALOT I LOVE YOUR WRITES KEEP IT UP.
    -CHRISTINA AKA POETRY
    | Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, I can't say i know how you feel because i don't have step-parents. My father has a couple of [censored]es running around(oh, did i mention that my parents are still married). Well, all I can say is you can take your anger out in a good way. Usually when Im mad and write a poem, I start ranting, but you seem to have it under control and i will applaud you on that. My favorite part in the poem is,

    "The only reason you are around
    Is because you clean the house
    That's rightyou are my mothers BITCH
    But you still try to control me
    Try to tell me what I can and can't do
    You are not my father"

    I really love that part. Well, I saw that you were new so i decided to see one of you poems. That you were new and we're the same age so yeah, bye.

    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2006-04-11 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]



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